Here is a short extract from a student dissertation, written in English by a Japanese student studying at a UK university:
These days, it is reported that increased researchers relies on the Web to find information and cite contents on the Web. In this context, secured web reference system is needed to ensure scientific knowledge cycle. Web archiving is one of options to avoid destruction of scholarly communication.
Here is the same passage after I had edited it:
These days, it is reported that researchers increasingly rely on the Web to find information and cite contents that are found there. In this context, a secure web referencing system is needed to ensure that scientific knowledge is protected. Web archiving is one of the options for avoiding the destruction of scholarly communications.
So, what are the differences? Firstly, “increased researchers” could sound as though the researchers themselves were getting bigger! Probably the most accurate “translation” of this would be “increased numbers of researchers”, but “researchers increasingly …” still conveys the sense of what the writer meant to say.
However, the main problem here was that the writer was unsure about when to use the “articles” in English. By this I mean “a/an” – the “indefinite article” – and “the” – the “definite article”. Many languages do not make this distinction, but in English there is a difference between “David scored a goal” and “David scored the goal” – in the first the implication is that there could have been several goals, but in the second it is clear that there was only one.
There are also occasions when it is best not to use an article at all. For example, “a small piece of cheese” has a slightly different meaning from “a small piece of a cheese”. In the former, “cheese” is taken to mean cheese in general, whereas in the latter reference is being made to a whole cheese in its original state.
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